Hi, a word of warning out of fairness that I only came here to share some old poetry I found of mine.

I wrote it a while back and some of it might be pretty good. I'm trying to get a sense of if it is good enough to get published (I dont want to make money off of it). So I figured I'd post it here and get some feedback.

#introduction #introductions #poem #poems #poetry

Here is my best rhyming piece, all critical feedback welcome:

jeffreyfreeman.me/the-mages-ta

@freemo really great poem, that's quite a vivid dream, felt like you could easily have been describing a real place!

@jasond It wasnt a dream but an attempt at describing how i'd view an aetherial meeting place of wizards :) Thank you.

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