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@cheribaker omniscient narrators are really annoying sometimes because it is too easy to be lazy and not let the actions of your characters reveal their motivations and knowledge, but to just say something like "she thought he was lying so she hid the location of the second artefact" rather than establishing that there are two artefacts and having the character only reveal one. it's more interesting because then I get that little dopamine hit for noticing the connections and discrepancy.

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