Page 5 of #mtkultra my #webcomic is up! Trying some new things. Would love to hear any feedback you might have. This is an experiment for me, and a way to practice getting better at my #art #writing and #storytelling .
https://mtkultra.com/005
Might spend some time #coding some navigation for the site soon. I'm using WriteFreely because I like the interface. You can read about my thoughts here: https://berkough.com/version-4-0
WebComic suggestions... DIY art...
@berkough
WebComic suggestions...
☑️ I like the layout of it...
☑️ and size of text in footer is clear.
Consider also these point in a nice way:
█ The text is actually unclear
Wasn't until I tried zooming in and enlarging comic that still it wasn't as clear (and opacity of some text is actually faded too unless really close)
█ and almost different font in each bubble.
█ And then for space usage (so more artistic suggestion and future art) I'd make the 1 bubble and it's text bigger so reader can read from far away to get interest while it's zoomed out or as thumbnail in your post.
(see my picture as example of what I mean)
